Nuanced Mirage

~♥~

Your voice carries

Caution, leaves smile

And eyes’ denim depths

Untouched…

You’re a nuanced mirage, melting

‘Mid hate-filled summer’s heat

As my arms reach through

Murk of night, struggle against

Clingy, longing-tossed sheets

Tears exhaust heart…

Dreaming again

©Rhen Laird/Cobbled Contemplations, 2020 ~ All rights reserved.

https://sammiscribbles.wordpress.com/2020/07/25/weekend-writing-prompt-167-nuance/


17 thoughts on “Nuanced Mirage

  1. Fabulous fabulous.. fantastic play of words. A story told with pure artistry.. a play unfolding. You set the stage for a dramatic play of words.

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        1. Bless you, bless you–I love that our writing so often resonates in some way to each other. Because I greatly admire your talent, I feel we’re usually on an even plane. Hope you’re surviving the heat–it’s 89 degrees in my apartment tonight…nearly too hot to write, yikes! 🙂

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            1. Oh my gosh, a humid 100–I should be grateful ours has gone down 6 degrees, hah! Can’t believe I baked brownies and cooked spaghetti today–for my neighbor who broke her leg 🙂 I’m a “sweaty saint”😇 (lacking modesty)

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                1. My hope is that, if I’m ever in such a situation, she might help me too 🙂 We’re both in 2nd floor apartments, seniors with disabilities–life is a constant challenge 🙂 The weather person just said it will be 10 degrees cooler tomorrow–I’ll take it!!! 🙂 Much love to you, Punam 💕💟

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